jueves, 24 de mayo de 2012

Between books and skirts (Final)

This story starts in a rich school. Susan is an attractive girl, spoiled and only child, she studied at the most prestigious school of their city, attending the tenth grade. Susan is a very smart girl and loves to study and she  gets up every day thinking about her literature class, which generates a lot of satisfaction, this class is given by their teacher Margarita, but she  have been  sick  with chronic tension. One day Susan works in the school computer room with her companions, when a friend comes to Susan and tells her teacher of literature has been hospitalized because of chronic stress and will be replaced by a new teacher.





After a long time the new literature professor arrives in London with great expectations, he is a man of Latin America.  Susan stealthy steps approaching the school and then go through the door, the whole school is in complete silence, what happened here? She asked, instantly absorbed it looked, was the new teacher, a handsome, intelligent and very interesting, she hurried to their place of study.

After a time, the teacher began to interest for Susan. He believes that she is very beautiful. The teacher began to talk with Susan about literature before and after class. He recommended many books for Susan. Initially the topics of the books were about fantastic literature of Latin America. After the topics were about love histories. From these romantic readings, Susan and Ricardo (the teacher's name), began to see more often, not only in school and in the literature class, but also in places of the city, this allowed them to know intimately. At first Susan did not grasp the message that Ricardo gave her when he told of romantic literature and their lives, because she was in a relationship with a schoolmate.

Despite her condition to know that her teacher had lassoed compromising embargoed Susan's feelings, passions and feelings that led to alienating an unexplained trance that went beyond her constant admiration, and likewise he who was in her deep exaltation of the beauty, sweetness, and clear each movement precocious young Susan, endless moments of deities, absolute frenzy, and the encounter with the mutual attraction that ties together and overwhelms the emotions, without a friendlier sign than the inner desire and a cold and distant salutation to hide the infatuation and desire for the amalgamation of feeling, speaking eternal dissimulation.

Susan wrapped handfuls of nervousness and insecurity that often and good humor, as he in his fervent desire to discover it, by making art in she, an unexpected brown envelope following reasons ,  both skins longed as each evening , a conversation wrapped in art, hidden symphony of feeling, each of her five senses will delight in the other unimagined, just him, only she for him, reveling after smile, after the new story that brings to both her clumsy behavior, with no claim to more passionately get carried away with the soul and desire, he stopping every impulse to possess, to care tenderly and walk a true and only time his white skin, a brown chocolate that comes wrapped accurate to describe such an impression, Susan inadvertently  spilled chocolate on his lips, her body shakes and freezes temporarily after finding her warm skin, it seems that they were looking for, looking to each other and kiss, just a causal  kiss, smashing any scheme, leading to an insurgent kiss extensions, worthy lovers hidden.


With the passing of the days the feelings lodged in the heart of Susan and Ricardo did not wait to show what their  mind and body craved daily and what was initially an unexpected kiss became a reason to share a few minutes after finishing the class with the pretext of supplementing explained on the romanticism classic, but all could not stay the same Ricardo longed eagerly to express the fervent love for his student, for it would expect the next encounter with Susan and propose something she never would expect.

The next day, Ricardo wrapped up in his joy was eager to hear the voice of your child and tell him what had prepared for it. He began the journey in his car, in the course of the road a truck that was before him, crashed. This event caused instability in the car of Ricardo couldn’t control despite his many attempts to do so, the vehicle quickly went to a bridge. The car flew through the air to fall into a river. Ricardo managed to escape through a window. However, the river flow was strong, and he was dragged to the stones that were in the middle of the river. At that moment everything became dark and Ricardo felt his death coming, lost his consciousness. When Richard opened his eyes was in an unknown location. Distraught and disoriented got up quickly, finding the young woman, who gently said -calm down please -. After a long talk, Rose explained what had happened. He says he does not remember anything of his life.



Over time, Ricardo decided to rebuild his life in this small town working as a carpenter. One day after work, Ricardo go to deliver an order to the owner of a bookstore, when he arrived he felt something familiar, it was "Love and Passion: A fantasy story", the book that years ago had given to Sussan. At this moment Ricardo began to remember every his life. Oblivious to anything, Ricardo ran with the book in his hands to the train station. From there he traveled to London with the desire to find Sussan and revive their love story.

When he arrived to Sussan’s home, he took a moment to breathe and taking courage, then he knocked the door not knowing what would be found there. After a minute, the door opened slowly, revealing a young child. Ricardo asked a little confused shakily by Sussan Wills. Immediately the boy shouted, "Mom, look you at the door".  A mixture of bitterness and confusion quickly enveloped the heart of Ricardo.

1 comentario:

  1. Very good job! I do prefer the change made to the end of the story, it was pretty intense and nicely delivered. I made some corrections as I noticed some mistakes on spelling, word order and tense consistency.

    Best,

    Elkin Moreno

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