After a long time the new literature professor arrives
in London with great expectations, he is a man of Latin America. Susan stealthy steps approaching the school
and then go through the door, the whole school is in complete silence, what
happened here? She asked, instantly absorbed it looked, was the new teacher, a
handsome, intelligent and very interesting, she hurried to their place of
study.
After a time, the teacher began to interest for
Susan. He believes that she is very beautiful. The teacher began to talk with
Susan about literature before and after class. He recommended many books for
Susan. Initially the topics of the books were about fantastic literature of
Latin America. After the topics were about love histories. From these romantic
readings, Susan and Ricardo (the teacher's name), began to see more often, not
only in school and in the literature class, but also in places of the city, this allowed them to know
intimately. At first Susan did not grasp the message
that Ricardo gave her when he told of romantic literature and their lives,
because she was in a relationship with a schoolmate.
Despite her condition to know that her teacher
had lassoed compromising embargoed Susan's feelings, passions and feelings that
led to alienating an unexplained trance that went beyond her constant admiration, and likewise
he who was in her deep exaltation of the beauty, sweetness, and clear each
movement precocious young Susan, endless moments of deities, absolute frenzy,
and the encounter with the mutual attraction that ties together and overwhelms
the emotions, without a friendlier sign than the inner desire and a cold and
distant salutation to hide the infatuation and desire for the amalgamation of
feeling, speaking eternal dissimulation.
Susan wrapped handfuls of nervousness and
insecurity that often and good humor, as he in his fervent desire to discover
it, by making art in she, an unexpected brown envelope following reasons , both skins longed as each evening , a
conversation wrapped in art, hidden symphony of feeling, each of her five
senses will delight in the other unimagined, just him, only she for him,
reveling after smile, after the new story that brings to both her clumsy
behavior, with no claim to more passionately get carried away with the soul and
desire, he stopping every impulse to possess, to care tenderly and walk a true
and only time his white skin, a brown chocolate that comes wrapped accurate to
describe such an impression, Susan inadvertently spilled chocolate on his lips, her body shakes
and freezes temporarily after finding her warm skin, it seems that they were
looking for, looking to each other and kiss, just a causal kiss, smashing any scheme, leading to an insurgent
kiss extensions, worthy lovers hidden.
With the passing of the days the feelings
lodged in the heart of Susan and Ricardo did not wait to show what their mind and body craved daily and what was
initially an unexpected kiss became a reason to share a few minutes after
finishing the class with the pretext of supplementing explained on the
romanticism classic, but all could not stay the same Ricardo longed eagerly to
express the fervent love for his student, for it would expect the next
encounter with Susan and propose something she never would expect.
The next day, Ricardo wrapped up in his joy was
eager to hear the voice of your child and tell him what had prepared for it. He
began the journey in his car, in the course of the road a truck that was before
him, crashed. This event caused instability in the car of Ricardo couldn’t
control despite his many attempts to do so, the vehicle quickly went to a
bridge. The car flew through the air to fall into a river. Ricardo managed to
escape through a window. However, the river flow was strong, and he was dragged
to the stones that were in the middle of the river. At that moment everything
became dark and Ricardo felt his death coming, lost his consciousness. When
Richard opened his eyes was in an unknown location. Distraught and disoriented
got up quickly, finding the young woman, who gently said -calm down please -.
After a long talk, Rose explained what had happened. He says he does not
remember anything of his life.
Over
time, Ricardo decided to rebuild his life in this small town working as a
carpenter. One day after work, Ricardo go to deliver an order to the owner of a
bookstore, when he arrived he felt something familiar, it was "Love and
Passion: A fantasy story", the book that years ago had given to Sussan. At
this moment Ricardo began to remember every his life. Oblivious to anything,
Ricardo ran with the book in his hands to the train station. From there he traveled
to London with the desire to find Sussan and revive their love story.
When he arrived to Sussan’s home, he took a moment to breathe and taking courage, then he knocked the door not knowing what would be found there. After a minute, the door opened slowly, revealing a young child. Ricardo asked a little confused shakily by Sussan Wills. Immediately the boy shouted, "Mom, look you at the door". A mixture of bitterness and confusion quickly enveloped the heart of Ricardo.
Very good job! I do prefer the change made to the end of the story, it was pretty intense and nicely delivered. I made some corrections as I noticed some mistakes on spelling, word order and tense consistency.
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Elkin Moreno