Living at the UN
When they
knew that they had been accepted to study in the National University of
Colombia, they realized that there was necessary to find a suitable place to
live while the university epoch, because there were nobody that could accept
them in their home. Mark had a cousin who had lived in a house near to the
campus, which was comfortable and suitable to his necessities, it was Mrs. Cano’s
house. She came from Tumaco, the hometown of Toto. It was the reason why Mrs.
Cano gave him a special price for his room. With an announcement posted in a
wall Sofia, Tupac and Diego knew that there were a good and a cheap opportunity
of a room, because they had been seeking in many other places with no well
results.
After one
month, there was a friendlier environment. However some of them didn’t know
some things about the life of the others. And that was the reason why Sofia had
the idea to go out with them to a night party, one Friday after classes. Tupac
and Diego didn’t agree with Sofia, because they rarely went out on Friday night
to a party. But finally Mark convinced them saying that they won’t take them
over midnight. That night all of them had a nice time, because everyone could
know something about the others. Tupac knew that Diego came from Suesca,
Boyaca. “I actually study Veterinary medicine” said Diego to him. He had been
living in the countryside all his life, and Diego’s family were so excited that
he could study especially what he liked to do.
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