sábado, 14 de abril de 2012

Between books and skirts

This story is in a rich school. Everything starts with a wonderful event which will have a fabulous outcome. Susan is an attractive girl, spoiled and only child; she studied at the most prestigious school of their city, attending the tenth grade. She is the daughter of the mayor, his father is very accommodating to her and gives her everything that she need, additionally cares for her and is very jealous of his only daughter. Susan is a very smart girl and loves to study, she gets up every day thinking about her literature class, which generates a lot of satisfaction, this class is dictated by the teacher Margarita, but she is sick by a chronic tension.

One day Susan works in the school computer room with her companions, when Julian the representative of the school comes to Susan and tells her teacher of literature has been hospitalized because of chronic stress and will be succeeded by a new teacher, she gets up from his chair and crying bitterly.  After a long time Susan can overcome this event and get ready to go to classes with the new teacher, she is very anxious to be there. The literature professor it’s a Latin-American man, which arrives to London with great expectations. Susan stealthy steps approaching the school and then go through the door, stops, something amazing happened, the whole school is in complete silence, upon entering the classroom to see their peers in silence, sitting properly and very amazed , - what happened here? - She asked, instantly absorbed it looked, was the new teacher, a handsome, intelligent and very interesting man, then she hurried to their place of study.

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  1. Good, I liked your idea, and I'll be looking forward to see your weekly additions and corrections.

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  2. BETWEEN BOOKS AND SKIRTS

    This story is in a rich school. everything starts with a wonderful event which will have a fabulous outcome. Susan is an attractive girl, spoiled and only child, she studied at the most prestigious school of their city, attending the tenth grade. She is the daughter of the mayor, his father is very accommodating to her and gives you everything you need, additionally cares for her and is very jealous of her only daughter. Susan is a very smart girl and loves to study, provided you have a score higher than their peers, Susan gets up every day thinking about your literature class, which generates a lot of satisfaction, this class is dictated by their teacher margarita, but she is sick with chronic tension quickly.

    One day Susan works in the school computer room with her companions, when Julian the representative of the school comes to Susan and tells her teacher of literature has been hospitalized because of chronic stress and will be succeeded by a new teacher she gets up from his chair and crying bitterly. After a long time Susan can overcome this event and get ready to go to classes in the new teacher, she is very anxious to be there. The literature professor is a man of Latin America, which arrives in London with great expectations. Susan stealthy steps approaching the school and then go through the door, stops, something amazing happened, the whole school is in complete silence, upon entering the classroom to see their peers in silence, sitting properly and very amazed , what happened here? She asked, instantly absorbed it looked, was the new teacher, a handsome, intelligent and very interesting, she hurried to their place of study and I am perplexed.

    After a time, the teacher began interested for Susan. He looks her and she seemed very beautiful. The teacher began talk with Susan about literature before and after class. He recommended many books for Susan. Initially the topics of the books were about fantastic literature of Latin-American. After the topics was about love histories. From these romantic readings, Susan and Ricardo (the teacher's name), began to see more often, not only in school and in the literature class, but also in place of the city, allowing known them more intimately. At first Susan did not grasp the message that Ricardo gave her when he speak of romantic literature and their lives, partly because the teacher was married and she was in a relationship with a schoolmate.

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  3. Despite her condition to know that her teacher had lassoed compromising embargoed Susan's feelings, passions and feelings that led to alienating a trance inexplicable that went beyond her constant admiration, and likewise he who was in her deep exaltation of the beauty, sweetness, and clear each movement precocious young Susan, conversations wrapped them both in a circle of magical realism of knowledge and interest of each other, it be discovered a world unknown, their interest in flying youthful and his idea of freedom and remind him it surprising to discover that look naive and youthful sensuality in every word, every idea and experience for him wrapped ambiguous and ignorance to her almost fleeting afternoon entangled in both undertook the tracing of a line in time, unknown in his own subconscious, endless moments of deities, absolute frenzy, and the encounter with the mutual attraction that ties together and overwhelms the emotions, without a sign friendlier than the inner desire and a cold and distant salutation to hide the infatuation and desire for the amalgamation of feeling, speaking eternal dissimulation.
    Susan wrapped handfuls of nervousness and insecurity that often and good humor, as he in his fervent desire to discover it, by making art in it, compose melodies verses inspiration, an unexpected brown envelope following reasons hexagon both skins longed as each evening , a conversation wrapped in art, hidden symphony of feeling, each of your five senses will delight in the other unimagined, restless eyes, lost one in the other outer oblivion, just him, only she for him, reveling after smile, after the new story that brings to both her clumsy behavior, with no claim to more passionately get carried away with the soul and desire, he stopping every impulse to possess, to care tenderly and walk a true and only time his white skin, a brown chocolate that comes wrapped accurate to describe such an impression, inadvertently spilled chocolate Susan on his lips, his hands delicate and tours that make the perfect space and unknown to rub his fingers around in clean fix her something, her body shakes and freezes temporarily after finding her warm skin, it seems that they were looking for, imanizan to each other and kiss, just kiss causal, smashing any scheme, leading to a kiss insurgent extensions, worthy lovers hidden.

    with the passing of the days the feelings lodged in the heart of Susan and Richard did not wait to show what your mind and body craved daily and what was initially an unexpected kiss became a reason to share a few minutes after finishing the class with the pretext of supplementing explained on the romantisism classic, but all could not stay the same Ricardo longed eagerly demonstrate the fervent love for your child regardless of people's minds, for it would expect the next encounter with susan and propose something she never would expect.

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  4. Ok, that's a very good job, but notice that your job is very good and you're closer to the goal, but in the next participation you can check spelling and grammar and make a new post instead of messages. Keep on working like that and advancing in your story as your job following deadlines and guidelines is good!

    Best,

    Elkin Moreno

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